Score: 2

"Keep em coming, Lava"

submission: [SG] Too Far

date: April 14, 2009

+1 Voices / sound
+1 for lip sync (It's a first for you!)
+1 for some humor
+1 For drawings and such.

-1 For the obnoxious penis. Yes, Cake is a douchebag but we dont need to spread his gayness into our eyes.
-1 For using obvious google images.

Advice:
The sound got out of sync towards the end- I'm not sure why. Are you using the "Event" sound? Set it to "Stream" instead. If you don't know what i'm talking about i'd be happy to show you.

The ending itself was abrupt. If your flash is going to be short, it needs to be short for a reason. Not because you were lazy. Put something radical or funny at the end. Like a giant explosion. You know what i mean.

Also, come on. You can draw a simple car (Box with four wheels?) and a grandma. It's not that hard. Something like a gun is a little harder to get to look just right, so that would be justifiable if you used some google images or w/e there.

All these things i've touched on are just a FEW things you could improve in your next flash. The thing i'm excited about is that you ARE, in fact, improving. I'd like to see you take this further for the sake of the gang.

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Score: 2 / 10

Score: 3

"Obnoxious..."

submission: clicker ver 2.0

date: April 2, 2009

Pros:
+3 I actually laughed a little. I don't know why.
+1 The game was just the right length.
+1 A boss fight.

Cons:
-1 The music drove me insane.
-1 The game wasn't extremely interactive.

Advice:
I like how you tried to make the most of your click game. That's always good. Now expand on that.

Also, it looks like you're using "Event" music. Down on the properties bar, where it says "Sound", look for a drop down menu that says "Event". Change that to "Stream". It'll keep the music from starting over if you go to the beginning of the flash.

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Score: 3 / 10

Score: 2

"The classic stick fight."

submission: Muay Thai Fight

date: April 2, 2009

Pros:
+3 For "fluid" animation.
+1 Some humor.
+1 Sound effects.

Cons:
-1 It was way too short for a stick fight animation.
-1 The music was horrible. Very scratchy and unpleasing. Contrasted too much with the crystal clear sound effects.
-1 No epic stick fight battle which i have come to expect. In other words, if you're going to do something unoriginal you need to do it GOOD.

Advice:
Extend your movie. Do new things. Maybe a story or something. Anybody who has seen "Xiao Xiao" knows that this movie is mediocre. Also, i'd advise putting in a preloader and "Play" button.
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Score: 2 / 10